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Will You Wear My Scars?
I want someone real
Someone to hold me
Laugh with me
See me
Peel back my layers
And stay anyway
I want you
Someone to hold me
Laugh with me
See me
Peel back my layers
And stay anyway
I want you
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Re. Will You Wear My Scars?
1st Oct 2024 1:17am
I initially misread the last line as... And stay away...
My immediate reaction was, 'Oh no, I couldn't possibly do that!' But there was some relief once my eyes refocused.
Your words remind me somewhat of Robbie Williams' (yes, him again, lol) video hit, 'Rock DJ'. If you do watch the video, you will definitely see he is peeling back the layers, quite literally! 😉
My immediate reaction was, 'Oh no, I couldn't possibly do that!' But there was some relief once my eyes refocused.
Your words remind me somewhat of Robbie Williams' (yes, him again, lol) video hit, 'Rock DJ'. If you do watch the video, you will definitely see he is peeling back the layers, quite literally! 😉
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1st Oct 2024 1:23am
You know I adore you, Billy…
You, me and that dock any day. Bring me some decaf coffee tho, hmm? That would be perfect :)
You, me and that dock any day. Bring me some decaf coffee tho, hmm? That would be perfect :)
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1st Oct 2024 1:24am
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Re. Will You Wear My Scars?
1st Oct 2024 2:46am
I swear, we all have scars and want someone to help us heal them. I had to add this to my reading list as well, you are speaking nothing, but facts. Hopefully you find that person to be your bandaid.
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Re. Will You Wear My Scars?
1st Oct 2024 6:00am
Having also seen the Rock DJ video I echo Billy Snagg's comment on the 'peel back the layers' line.
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Re. Will You Wear My Scars?
1st Oct 2024 12:20pm
I think we all want that, someone who's there for us - even in the darkest times.
This one resonates with me, it reminds me of the song "Under Your Scars" by Godsmack.
...how many times I listened to that one...
This one resonates with me, it reminds me of the song "Under Your Scars" by Godsmack.
...how many times I listened to that one...
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Re: Re. Will You Wear My Scars?
1st Oct 2024 8:11pm
Thank you, D💕
I believe you’re right. The fundamental need for connection, regardless of whatever carry. We all have it.
I believe you’re right. The fundamental need for connection, regardless of whatever carry. We all have it.
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1st Oct 2024 8:48pm
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Re. Will You Wear My Scars?
2nd Oct 2024 1:50am
Ugh. Yeah. Dammit. Just fucking see me already.
Sorry for the UGH! That's just where my head is with this stuff right now, not a reflection of your poetry! What you've written here is beautiful and relatable... I just wish I couldn't relate.
❤k
Sorry for the UGH! That's just where my head is with this stuff right now, not a reflection of your poetry! What you've written here is beautiful and relatable... I just wish I couldn't relate.
❤k
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Re: Re. Will You Wear My Scars?
2nd Oct 2024 1:56am
Thank you, k
I thought for the longest one I was the only one who felt like this. The more I write and post about what I’m going through right now the more I find that most people relate. We’re all pretty much picking up our broken pieces together. We just think nobody else is.
I thought for the longest one I was the only one who felt like this. The more I write and post about what I’m going through right now the more I find that most people relate. We’re all pretty much picking up our broken pieces together. We just think nobody else is.
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3rd Oct 2024 11:52pm