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Gems
My nieces
Are star-cut gems;
My nephew,
The very stature
Of worth;
My own children;
Half-drunken dreams,
That shall know
No birth.
Are star-cut gems;
My nephew,
The very stature
Of worth;
My own children;
Half-drunken dreams,
That shall know
No birth.
Published 29th Sep 2024
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29th Sep 2024 1:46am
29th Sep 2024 3:18am
Dear TMW,
For me. There is a hollow sadness in dreams unfulfilled in this piece. Beautiful images of what might have been seen through another’s reality. Difficult subject, great writing. H🌷
For me. There is a hollow sadness in dreams unfulfilled in this piece. Beautiful images of what might have been seen through another’s reality. Difficult subject, great writing. H🌷
29th Sep 2024 3:26am
30th Sep 2024 10:51am
