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shuffling along the pavement

a walk in the city
I had quite a good day
as far as it went

Written by dartford

(Paul S...)

Published 29th Sep 2024

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Re. shuffling along the pavement

29th Sep 2024 1:01am

I wish my gout would let me do that.

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Re. shuffling along the pavement

30th Sep 2024 00:02am

Nice, Paul. Succinct and yet burgeoning with imagery!

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