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Dreams of Autumn
aeries in glades continue to dance
to memories of sunny days and blooms passed
but darker shadows are arrived
mantles to the spirit of Fall
the sighs of breeze through the trees
shedding their beauty to the ground
standing stark among evergreens
with branches like anguished claws
warmth of the hearth embrace
call the beloved to their home
watching the last leaf of autumn
makes it way to the ground below
to memories of sunny days and blooms passed
but darker shadows are arrived
mantles to the spirit of Fall
the sighs of breeze through the trees
shedding their beauty to the ground
standing stark among evergreens
with branches like anguished claws
warmth of the hearth embrace
call the beloved to their home
watching the last leaf of autumn
makes it way to the ground below
Published 26th Sep 2024
Author's Note
Taken from Poem of 2024 thread
Remembrance
Soul🕊️🍁
Thinking of you
Remembrance
Soul🕊️🍁
Thinking of you
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27th Sep 2024 4:09am
27th Sep 2024 3:14pm
Dear G,
I enjoyed the beauty of this poem. For me it focuses on the seasonal change and calls to mind those I miss who can’t share it with me. Beautifully written. H🌷
I enjoyed the beauty of this poem. For me it focuses on the seasonal change and calls to mind those I miss who can’t share it with me. Beautifully written. H🌷
27th Sep 2024 3:15pm
28th Sep 2024 4:34am
28th Sep 2024 5:02pm
Indeed. Just remembering my friends especially Soul as his D-anniversary nears. Thank you Phantom.🌹
14th Oct 2024 3:15am
"the sighs of breeze through the trees
shedding their beauty to the ground"
I'd written poem some time back in the early 90s that brought back the memory of a similar emotion and image.
Wonderful work.
shedding their beauty to the ground"
I'd written poem some time back in the early 90s that brought back the memory of a similar emotion and image.
Wonderful work.
14th Oct 2024 12:47pm
15th Oct 2024 10:04am
And you are shedding your wonderful poetry in your reader's avid heart! A meticulous display of fall beauty! An immense delight reading you..
15th Oct 2024 12:13pm
