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An Ode To The Redwoods
What magic lies hidden in these ancient woods
These giant trees that stretch up past the sky
Who's fingers seem to touch the sun one last time
And kiss the day good by
How long have these immortal woods
Witnessed the rise and fall of night
How many times have they watched the stars revolve
Through green needled leaves
And twisted branches
These giant trees that stretch up past the sky
Who's fingers seem to touch the sun one last time
And kiss the day good by
How long have these immortal woods
Witnessed the rise and fall of night
How many times have they watched the stars revolve
Through green needled leaves
And twisted branches
Published 16th May 2012
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Anonymous
16th May 2012 10:45am
This is the second piece of yours i have read today, and i am as equally impressed with the imagery that is presented in it.
Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work.
17th May 2012 12:14pm
19th May 2012 8:13pm
Thank you I like this poem quite a bit myslef, not the one I thought i had posted though.
