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A poem for my daughter
I mess up sometimes
I make mistakes
I give too much in a world that takes
I fail I fall
I go back to old ways
I do regret what I did in past days
I lose my temper
I over think
I waste to much of myself on drink
I gotta say through it all to you
I always mean the best I do
And I will always love so true
I make mistakes
I give too much in a world that takes
I fail I fall
I go back to old ways
I do regret what I did in past days
I lose my temper
I over think
I waste to much of myself on drink
I gotta say through it all to you
I always mean the best I do
And I will always love so true
Published 18th Sep 2024
| Edited 14th Oct 2024
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- Edited 6th Nov 2024 8:45pm
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18th Sep 2024 4:58pm
19th Sep 2024 4:25am
Dear C,
This piece makes me think your daughter will forever know you with a gift like this. It’s easy to forget parents are humans with their own foibles. Expressing humility and love, this is a lovely write. H🌷
This piece makes me think your daughter will forever know you with a gift like this. It’s easy to forget parents are humans with their own foibles. Expressing humility and love, this is a lovely write. H🌷
19th Sep 2024 2:53pm
