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Be
Black, white
Gay or straight
Beam your light
To fuck with the hate
Pretty, feel ugly
Plump or thin
Always remember
Beauty's within
Don't think too far
Live for today
Your golden star
Is moments away
My moral is...
Don't give a fuck
Be yourself
I wish you all luck
Gay or straight
Beam your light
To fuck with the hate
Pretty, feel ugly
Plump or thin
Always remember
Beauty's within
Don't think too far
Live for today
Your golden star
Is moments away
My moral is...
Don't give a fuck
Be yourself
I wish you all luck
Published 18th Sep 2024
| Edited 23rd Sep 2024
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18th Sep 2024 10:55am
18th Sep 2024 11:41am
18th Sep 2024 2:21pm
I saw the model in your picture doing a Victoria's Secret show to me she was the most beautiful that night because she was most grateful to be there great write 💕
18th Sep 2024 2:46pm
18th Sep 2024 2:56pm
"Pretty, feel ugly"
That struck me as a very powerful distinction. Beauty is subjective, I've been told. Feeling ugly & being ugly are worlds apart. Thank you for this gem
That struck me as a very powerful distinction. Beauty is subjective, I've been told. Feeling ugly & being ugly are worlds apart. Thank you for this gem
18th Sep 2024 3:20pm
Quite right Willow, each to their own but I've never been hung up on looks as in my poem I believe it comes from within, anyways thanks for stopping by 🙃❤️
18th Sep 2024 4:31pm
18th Sep 2024 4:45pm
18th Sep 2024 8:44pm
"Don't think too far
Live for today
Your golden star
Is moments away"
Enjoyed this stanza particularly, Pete. 😊🌟
Live for today
Your golden star
Is moments away"
Enjoyed this stanza particularly, Pete. 😊🌟
18th Sep 2024 9:12pm
19th Sep 2024 6:56am
Dear P,
A right call to arms, so to speak. Great reminder it’s okay to be “you”. Your rhyming and meter were terrific. Great piece. H🌷
A right call to arms, so to speak. Great reminder it’s okay to be “you”. Your rhyming and meter were terrific. Great piece. H🌷
19th Sep 2024 11:40am
20th Sep 2024 3:08am
I like the I don't give a fuck message, tied in with great flow. Nice write, Pete. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
20th Sep 2024 9:08am
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2024 3:03am
Life is too short.
Enjoy the ride no matter the hide
Yep!!
Enjoy the ride no matter the hide
Yep!!
23rd Sep 2024 12:59pm
