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Spanning

Spanning brutal beast, dragon drew in dreams.
Magic through belief, passion fluently.
Saturn strewn as lead, lasting pews for greed.
Man is moon degrees, masking muses meet.
 
Stagnant truancy, Sabbath loses means.
Candid cluelessly, Adam's fusing seed.
Ransom rooting Eve, mantle mood agrees.
Phantom fuses feats, damage moving nears.
 
Ambiguity, scrambling suitably.
Tangents ruin peace, standing you and me.
Sanctum shrews achieve, manage cruelty's grief.
Ravaged runes repeat, savage blues too deep.
 
Handed hewn mystique, handle hues from Greek.
Taxing true belief, rapture, spoon, or lease.
Angered youth on streets, ration soon depletes.
Random view of thieves, sands congruently.
 
Granted gruesomely, fathom future fee.
Passing noon perceived, black is broom to sweep.
Scattered humans read, lapse acuity.
That which proves your need, addled cue will cleave.
 
Madder jubilee, hatter ruses reap.
Matter usury, rabbit foolery.
Mastered shroomery, sanction looping keen.
Tangled doom unseen, laughter lucidly.
 
Channeled tomb retreat, rather ruthlessly.
Angles choosing bleed, Cherub broods deceive.
Plastic pool conceives, acting spools unweaves.
Candle eulogy, bastard duty deed.
 
Lamb has to redeem, practiced looming frees.
That death rules esteem, fashions proof believed.
Fabric newly cleaned, Baptist beautifully.
After unity, masses fruitfully.
Written by Connotation
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Author's Note
Another lengthy rhyming exercise in attempt to use such a format to depict and describe evil influence of man and on man.  No matter what he does, or where he turns for ideas, they are all void of proper conception, at least religiously and politically.  This goes through some unique metaphors of putting that struggle into perception, as a means to convey myself artistically.  I'm not attempting to insult or be inconsiderate.  In fact, if people could open their eyes to some of what poems like this and others of mine are about, perhaps the magnitude and momentum of evil personified by Satan and man would make sense in the momentum of time we live in.  Anyway, from a standpoint, it's just 5-syllable schemes, used twice in a sentence, that rhyme.  There are 4 sentences per stanza. 8 stanzas.
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