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The third eye
The moon - a pearly bindi
with its mystical aura,
sits between the invisible eyes
of the skies;
It's the third eye
which opens a portal
to the soul of the heavens
connecting to the divine...
with its mystical aura,
sits between the invisible eyes
of the skies;
It's the third eye
which opens a portal
to the soul of the heavens
connecting to the divine...
Published 16th Sep 2024
| Edited Today
Author's Note
Just written on a whim....
Bindi meaning - a small coloured mark or jewel (= precious stone) that is worn between the eyebrows, especially by the Indian women
Bindi meaning - a small coloured mark or jewel (= precious stone) that is worn between the eyebrows, especially by the Indian women
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16th Sep 2024 11:20pm
Love the way this great poem led to the last line; another example of your unique creative and poetic skills. Hugs and love.
16th Sep 2024 11:23pm
Thanks a lot, dearest ,for your kind. N encouraging feedback. Appreciate it 🌹
17th Sep 2024 00:25am
17th Sep 2024 3:02pm
Thanks a bunch Tam🌹 It's such an honour to see my poem making it to your reading list ❤️
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17th Sep 2024 4:28am
I like the concept of the eyes in the sky. This has a mellow, spiritual feel to it. Very nice.
17th Sep 2024 3:05pm
17th Sep 2024 12:30pm
So beautiful, poetess. I enjoyed the feeling of serenity I felt while reading this. Your work does that for me. Thank you.
17th Sep 2024 3:52pm
Awww....dearest H I'm all over the moon after reading your comments...that's so kind of you pretty poetess..❤️
Today 8:25pm
Peacefully nice.
Calming our thoughts.
The only difference between the moon and us...
...is in the way in which we look into our inner selves.
Calming our thoughts.
The only difference between the moon and us...
...is in the way in which we look into our inner selves.
Today 10:18pm
