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The third eye
The moon - a pearly bindi
with its mystical aura,
sits between the invisible eyes
of the skies;
It's the third eye
which opens a portal
to the soul of the heavens
connecting to the divine...
with its mystical aura,
sits between the invisible eyes
of the skies;
It's the third eye
which opens a portal
to the soul of the heavens
connecting to the divine...
Author's Note
Just written on a whim....
Bindi meaning - a small coloured mark or jewel (= precious stone) that is worn between the eyebrows, especially by the Indian women
Bindi meaning - a small coloured mark or jewel (= precious stone) that is worn between the eyebrows, especially by the Indian women
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Re. The third eye
16th Sep 2024 11:20pm
Love the way this great poem led to the last line; another example of your unique creative and poetic skills. Hugs and love.
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16th Sep 2024 11:23pm
Thanks a lot, dearest ,for your kind. N encouraging feedback. Appreciate it 🌹
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17th Sep 2024 00:25am
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17th Sep 2024 3:02pm
Thanks a bunch Tam🌹 It's such an honour to see my poem making it to your reading list ❤️
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17th Sep 2024 00:29am
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Re. The third eye
17th Sep 2024 4:28am
I like the concept of the eyes in the sky. This has a mellow, spiritual feel to it. Very nice.
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17th Sep 2024 3:05pm
Re. The third eye
17th Sep 2024 12:30pm
So beautiful, poetess. I enjoyed the feeling of serenity I felt while reading this. Your work does that for me. Thank you.
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17th Sep 2024 3:52pm
Awww....dearest H I'm all over the moon after reading your comments...that's so kind of you pretty poetess..❤️
Re. The third eye
19th Sep 2024 8:25pm
Peacefully nice.
Calming our thoughts.
The only difference between the moon and us...
...is in the way in which we look into our inner selves.
Calming our thoughts.
The only difference between the moon and us...
...is in the way in which we look into our inner selves.
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20th Sep 2024 2:10pm
I'm so happy to know that you found it very calming to your senses.
That's true ...thanks for sharing your thoughts, dear poet 😊
That's true ...thanks for sharing your thoughts, dear poet 😊
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19th Sep 2024 10:18pm
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20th Sep 2024 2:14pm
Thank you so much ,dear poet for the great review and honouring me with the reading list add🌹
Yes, bindi is a Hindi word. 😊
Yes, bindi is a Hindi word. 😊
Re. The third eye
28th Sep 2024 6:09am
Phenomenal write. I'm glad I found your page. You're a gifted poetess. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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28th Sep 2024 12:10pm
Awww ...thank you so much for the uplifting comments. You are too kind❤️...and I'm grateful to you for exploring my work..
Thanks a bunch for your time ,dear Damian 🌹
Thanks a bunch for your time ,dear Damian 🌹