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The Final Act
Before a storm
There is calm
I was warm
In your arms
You unwrapped
Said goodbye
The final act...
You & I
There is calm
I was warm
In your arms
You unwrapped
Said goodbye
The final act...
You & I
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Re. The Final Act
15th Sep 2024 1:13pm
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Re. The Final Act
15th Sep 2024 3:26pm
There is always comfort in familiar arms but moving on is the hardest part when the love is no longer there.
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Re. The Final Act
15th Sep 2024 7:59pm
Depending on the drama there may be a recall...even a new audition. Hugs and love. Oral
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15th Sep 2024 9:20pm
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Re. The Final Act
16th Sep 2024 3:20am
Dear P,
You’ve captured that awful energy of an ending with a brevity of words that’s very impressive. This made me think how hollow the feeling is when a relationship comes to an end even when it’s the right thing to have happened. Difficult subject, excellent writing. H🌷
You’ve captured that awful energy of an ending with a brevity of words that’s very impressive. This made me think how hollow the feeling is when a relationship comes to an end even when it’s the right thing to have happened. Difficult subject, excellent writing. H🌷
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16th Sep 2024 10:16am
Re. The Final Act
16th Sep 2024 3:35am
Powerful write, Pete. The kind that tugs on my heartstrings, we've all been there once or twice. Best wishes brother. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.
DL
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Re. The Final Act
16th Sep 2024 10:17am
Re. The Final Act
16th Sep 2024 9:46pm
This whole spill completely unravels right before my very eyes, Pete. It's such a sad read.
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16th Sep 2024 10:11pm