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A quickie
Laying on the couch behind her
the blinking glow of the television
lit up the room like neon lights.
We made love all day
with only our eyes and conversation.
When she lifted her leg up and giggled
it was her invitation to let me in.
And when our clothes came off
I couldn't tell you for the life of me
what we had been watching
the blinking glow of the television
lit up the room like neon lights.
We made love all day
with only our eyes and conversation.
When she lifted her leg up and giggled
it was her invitation to let me in.
And when our clothes came off
I couldn't tell you for the life of me
what we had been watching
Published 15th Sep 2024
| Edited 18th Sep 2024
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I threw this together quick. I'm too busy and preoccupied to write or review here.
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15th Sep 2024 1:44am
16th Sep 2024 7:11pm
15th Sep 2024 7:30am
Echo Fianaturie's comment. The kind of quickie session where you end up not remembering what was on the telly!
16th Sep 2024 7:11pm
16th Sep 2024 1:46pm
Making love with only your eyes and conversation is so intimate.
And a quickie so good you can't remember what was on television is the best.
Great piece Tim, awesome to see you back and post something.
And a quickie so good you can't remember what was on television is the best.
Great piece Tim, awesome to see you back and post something.
16th Sep 2024 7:12pm
