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Head Case
Woven into my skull the lies you preach
Constructing talking points out of thin air
Attention whore so in need of validation
Seeing nothing behind your vacant stare
Unquenchable is this thirst for ignorance
Which is displayed every time you speak
Peddling empty promises to the masses
Overcompensating to not appear so weak
I’m so tired of constantly seeing your face
And dealing with a simple minded head case
Constructing talking points out of thin air
Attention whore so in need of validation
Seeing nothing behind your vacant stare
Unquenchable is this thirst for ignorance
Which is displayed every time you speak
Peddling empty promises to the masses
Overcompensating to not appear so weak
I’m so tired of constantly seeing your face
And dealing with a simple minded head case
Published 11th Sep 2024
Author's Note
Late night musing. I'm so tired of listening to some, Snake-oil Salesman spreading fear and lies.
- Damian DeadLove
" You take a mortal man
And put him in control
Watch him become a god
Watch people's heads a-roll"
- Dave Mustaine
- Damian DeadLove
" You take a mortal man
And put him in control
Watch him become a god
Watch people's heads a-roll"
- Dave Mustaine
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11th Sep 2024 9:14am
12th Sep 2024 2:41am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, LDF. Means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
11th Sep 2024 9:28am
Your musings are quite profound. Your write and author's remind me of a quote by Ghandi: "The day the power of love overrules the love of power, the world will know peace." Amazing piece of ink, DL.
12th Sep 2024 2:44am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Duende. Really means a lot to me. Great quote. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
11th Sep 2024 10:24am
12th Sep 2024 2:45am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Pete. I agree with you. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
11th Sep 2024 2:07pm
12th Sep 2024 2:48am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Tams. At least I'm not the only one who's frustrated. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
12th Sep 2024 2:25am
An abounding elucidation of the puppet mastery behind the scenes. It's becoming more and more common for people to see corruption. I like how neat and tidy you kept this. It was a clean write. You balance your vocabulary quite well, especially in transition from rhyme to rhyme, and the reasons in between. Good, balanced shift in direction, and solid in building up to the ending. Anyway, good job.
12th Sep 2024 2:50am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, brother. Really means a lot to me. I'm so glad you liked it. Much respect. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
