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The Flu
An unwanted invasion of my person
has me cursing and using all sorts of profanity
in this crazy insanity of my brain
which is causing me to go insane
for every muscle is screaming to repent
of the day bent with unwanted chaos
Tumbling to and fro
as the pain ebbs and flows
every nuance and every crack
in every seam up my back
Medication is but a minor respite.
For this pain is making me desperate
Every year it infiltrates my soul
Taking a grip won't let go
They say one injection, and you will be free
One injection into the heart of me
Should I take what is my money,
to insert this man-made honey.
To conquer an enemy
that changes its identity every year.
Why did I have to catch the flu this year.
has me cursing and using all sorts of profanity
in this crazy insanity of my brain
which is causing me to go insane
for every muscle is screaming to repent
of the day bent with unwanted chaos
Tumbling to and fro
as the pain ebbs and flows
every nuance and every crack
in every seam up my back
Medication is but a minor respite.
For this pain is making me desperate
Every year it infiltrates my soul
Taking a grip won't let go
They say one injection, and you will be free
One injection into the heart of me
Should I take what is my money,
to insert this man-made honey.
To conquer an enemy
that changes its identity every year.
Why did I have to catch the flu this year.
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Re. The Flu
10th Sep 2024 10:46pm
Nothing worse Fia, my Mum gets the jab every year and still ends up with it! Anyways wishing you a speedy recovery ❤️
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10th Sep 2024 10:48pm
Re. The Flu
I sympathise. Yes, there are good & bad reasons to take up the vaccine. The pain, ouch & also the lack of natural immunity are bad reasons. I bet you wish you took the vaccine now! 🐻🤣
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10th Sep 2024 11:01pm
Re. The Flu
10th Sep 2024 11:42pm
Super sorry you're ill Lady, but we also don't do vaccines. We wear a mask even at work now and we stockpile lots of bleach and lysol Hoping you get better soon Lady
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10th Sep 2024 11:48pm
Re. The Flu
10th Sep 2024 11:54pm
Sorry to hear about the flu. Rest, replenish, and stay home for a bit. Get some sun. Is your Vit D levels low? No need for a vax. Just take vitamins, eat foods with vitamins & mineral and avoid stress.
By the way, great poem!!
By the way, great poem!!
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Re: Re. The Flu
11th Sep 2024 00:16am
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11th Sep 2024 00:16am
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11th Sep 2024 00:19am
Re. The Flu
11th Sep 2024 1:05am
Did you check for Covid?! Flu?! Mumps?! Nile virus?! (RSV)?! Chickenpox?! Measles?!… ok I’m getting paranoid
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Re: Re. The Flu
11th Sep 2024 1:09am
SAM,.....Calm down...Mumps??? really lol
(I'm in the medical field, remember.)
(I'm in the medical field, remember.)
Re. The Flu
11th Sep 2024 4:30am
Brilliant write, Fia. Hope you get to feeling better. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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11th Sep 2024 11:45am
Re. The Flu
11th Sep 2024 9:43am
Oh no, being sick sucks. Somehow you managed to create an amazing poem out of it.
Hope your feel better soon, dear Fia 💕
Hope your feel better soon, dear Fia 💕
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11th Sep 2024 11:45am
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11th Sep 2024 11:46am
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11th Sep 2024 12:50pm
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11th Sep 2024 12:56pm
Re. The Flu
This serious poems reads on many levels, the main one is that seasonal infection , of which i personality use Tisane, herbal potions and a very hot shower before bed...medication is not advisable as its not a serious sickness,but actually a good reaction from the sane body to external climate change, roughly half a month and things will be better,
fast recovery my friend..
Hamid's best regards
fast recovery my friend..
Hamid's best regards
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11th Sep 2024 1:42pm
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Re. The Flu
15th Sep 2024 6:25pm
I used to catch colds n bugs a lot, then I started drinking fresh lemon and orange juice every day plus multivitamin tablets. Iv been bug free for the past few years.
2 tablespoons of honey every morning also boosts my immune system. 🤧
Xxx
2 tablespoons of honey every morning also boosts my immune system. 🤧
Xxx
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15th Sep 2024 6:50pm