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High Tide
My rolling seas
Crashed
Into his dynamic lifeforce
My longing
To be
Violently claimed
Before the eventual
Ebb that always befalls us
Flooded him
With every reminder
Every fiber
Every last drop of memory
Retreating
I was Left on the fringes
Of us
As purgatory
Engulfed
Me
Crashed
Into his dynamic lifeforce
My longing
To be
Violently claimed
Before the eventual
Ebb that always befalls us
Flooded him
With every reminder
Every fiber
Every last drop of memory
Retreating
I was Left on the fringes
Of us
As purgatory
Engulfed
Me
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Re. High Tide
10th Sep 2024 4:35pm
Rolling, crashing, longing. Such a beautiful peek into the passion you bring to your relationships.
It comes through vividly. Gorgeous poem.
It comes through vividly. Gorgeous poem.
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Re. High Tide
10th Sep 2024 5:41pm
Love the illustration with water and tide, especially these lines:
My rolling seas
Crashed
Into his dynamic lifeforce
My rolling seas
Crashed
Into his dynamic lifeforce
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Re. High Tide
11th Sep 2024 5:40am
Re. High Tide
11th Sep 2024 10:04am
What an sublime piece of ink this is. The wording and imagery are simply amazing 💕
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