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Straitjacket Of Longing
slipping
in and out
of your gravity
ebb and flow
of emotions
luscious torture
detailed thoughts
about you
wishes about us
were a craving
i have tried
to deny
how
your beauty
unfolds
blooming
within
the universe
such a
delicious
paradox
that simply
drives me
to madness
be my
straitjacket
in and out
of your gravity
ebb and flow
of emotions
luscious torture
detailed thoughts
about you
wishes about us
were a craving
i have tried
to deny
how
your beauty
unfolds
blooming
within
the universe
such a
delicious
paradox
that simply
drives me
to madness
be my
straitjacket
Published 9th Sep 2024
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9th Sep 2024 8:22am
9th Sep 2024 7:03pm
9th Sep 2024 6:36pm
Love the clever crawl down the page.... raw admissions with each wonderfully written line... totally draws me in.
I had to jump on and say how much I adore seeing you post and reading your ink.
Missed it, muchly. (u too!)
xo-🌹
I had to jump on and say how much I adore seeing you post and reading your ink.
Missed it, muchly. (u too!)
xo-🌹
9th Sep 2024 7:08pm
i appreciate uou jumping on your comment as usual makes me sound like a poet
14th Sep 2024 6:04am
The title alone is a poem within itself. Then came the subsequent layout...
So many ways to flip this....Damn this is so inspiring!!!
So many ways to flip this....Damn this is so inspiring!!!
14th Sep 2024 3:31pm
