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Doorway

It wasn�t only
once

you said to me
goodbye

just to return.

Written by ursa

Published 7th Sep 2024

#apathy #disappointment #heartbroken

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Re. Doorway

7th Sep 2024 00:11am

I�ve had one of these revolving doohickies�

Holding you in thought, poetess.

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7th Sep 2024 2:29pm

thank you so much 💜
wishing you well,
ursa

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7th Sep 2024 4:02pm

Same to you💕

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Re. Doorway

7th Sep 2024 2:42pm

Ain't nobody got time for that, Ursa! You deserve better; you deserve a permanent "hello".

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7th Sep 2024 9:54pm

ooh, a permanent hello... I love that.
thank you 💜 so much!

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Re. Doorway

9th Sep 2024 5:29am

Dear U,

Oh boy. I know from this doorway also but I could never express it so poetically. H🌷

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10th Sep 2024 1:14pm

Dear H,
Thank you for your kind comment 💜
warmly,
ursa

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