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A TINY TRAVEL
Published 5th Sep 2024
Author's Note
A little poem I wrote for competition called crazy 8 . It's a cute visual poem about a tiny black princess ant riding on a black sugar fast ant until she encounters a bumble bee that speaks to her. Hope all like.
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5th Sep 2024 8:07pm
I love this. The flow & the rhymes are perfect. Has a children's image and flow to the poem. Nicely done!
6th Sep 2024 00:54am
Yea I love this cute poem aining fir children tbh. I wanna try to make it longer or simply make a story poem now that I have the picture art idea. I did write another similar poem for kids called the magic jar. It's long enough to make a kids book out of it. Thanks vision for liking.
6th Sep 2024 00:59am
