deepundergroundpoetry.com
Filling The Void
Peeled...
like the sweet flesh
of an orange...
letting the pulpous sticky
nectar of my goodness
cascade around you
Like a sensual blessing
embracing you within each delicate fold
of my ambrosia...
Hoping you loose yourself in me
and I...hoping to find myself in you
With each embrace...
and taste
of flesh..and skin
ancient secrets are revealed
until I know what language
your soul was written in
As the life force of your
phallus impales me to the source
of you...connecting are spirits
within each drop of sweat
intertwining our need to want
and be had...
As our legs and arms
liken us to a new brand of creature
that bleats and moans in a language
that is sacred..
only to be known by soul wrenching lovers
Who care not for tommorrow...
and only exsist in this moment
Now...
Here...
In the presesnce of the universe
We surrender ourselves to this passion
we surrender ourselves to this need
we surrender ourselves to this desire
Until the void inside us both
has been filled
like the sweet flesh
of an orange...
letting the pulpous sticky
nectar of my goodness
cascade around you
Like a sensual blessing
embracing you within each delicate fold
of my ambrosia...
Hoping you loose yourself in me
and I...hoping to find myself in you
With each embrace...
and taste
of flesh..and skin
ancient secrets are revealed
until I know what language
your soul was written in
As the life force of your
phallus impales me to the source
of you...connecting are spirits
within each drop of sweat
intertwining our need to want
and be had...
As our legs and arms
liken us to a new brand of creature
that bleats and moans in a language
that is sacred..
only to be known by soul wrenching lovers
Who care not for tommorrow...
and only exsist in this moment
Now...
Here...
In the presesnce of the universe
We surrender ourselves to this passion
we surrender ourselves to this need
we surrender ourselves to this desire
Until the void inside us both
has been filled
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 10
reading list entries 2
comments 15
reads 1512
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
romance not lust
15th May 2012 1:00am
You are really showing us your true scope of writing talents at the moment. This is, IMO, an extremely romantic read, done in your unique style, and written with the lightness of a quill rather than the heavy crayon you use in your lust fuelled poems.
Absolutely loved it and hope there will be many more like this.
Much love and gratitude D xx
Absolutely loved it and hope there will be many more like this.
Much love and gratitude D xx
0
re: romance not lust
15th May 2012 1:17am
Waggy, I am honored that you have
seen the inside of my heart with this write
I am a romantic at heart.. truely most of my erotic
would be written this way...save not for my
hornier moments...
I am striving to become a more wel rounded writer
such as your self.
as I read your work..
It gives me a bar to strive for.
thank you for reading!
seen the inside of my heart with this write
I am a romantic at heart.. truely most of my erotic
would be written this way...save not for my
hornier moments...
I am striving to become a more wel rounded writer
such as your self.
as I read your work..
It gives me a bar to strive for.
thank you for reading!
Beautifully seductive
15th May 2012 1:39am
This is breathtaking firebyrd..you have captured the essence of love, romance and beauty and weaved it into this spectacular piece..i loved it! fc
0
re: Beautifully seductive
15th May 2012 1:53am
Thank you FCxx
I am a romantic at heart as I stated to Waggy
adn In my writing what turns out to be erotic
Often starts out as something Romantic in my mind.
I honestly dont know what this kind of love is like
I guess Im writing about the idea of it all.
Thank you soo much for reading!
I am a romantic at heart as I stated to Waggy
adn In my writing what turns out to be erotic
Often starts out as something Romantic in my mind.
I honestly dont know what this kind of love is like
I guess Im writing about the idea of it all.
Thank you soo much for reading!
Re: Filling The Void
15th May 2012 7:01am
"until I know what language
your soul was written in"
Woah... Now this is how you search for someone to fill a void that you have!
Firebyrd, keep up the good work! I love poems that are explicit and dirty. In fact, that's how I want my romance to be.
Lovey dovey with some explicit and crass stuff on the side.
your soul was written in"
Woah... Now this is how you search for someone to fill a void that you have!
Firebyrd, keep up the good work! I love poems that are explicit and dirty. In fact, that's how I want my romance to be.
Lovey dovey with some explicit and crass stuff on the side.
0
re: Re: Filling The Void
15th May 2012 10:25pm
Re: Filling The Void
15th May 2012 11:51am
enraptured and unbridled passion. The need to fill the void within...........longing. Damn Phoenix lady. These are the words that send a real man on a quest! I feel your desire, really I do. That do me creates a deeply moving sensual write. This is outstanding. Kentucky huh? : )
0
re: Re: Filling The Void
15th May 2012 10:26pm
Mr. M I am so glad you enjoyed this.
I was striving to release i vivid image
of passion.
I am glad ...you felt it.
I was striving to release i vivid image
of passion.
I am glad ...you felt it.
Re: Filling The Void
Anonymous
15th May 2012 3:14pm
Firebyrd,
You had me drenched in the sticky sweetness of your nectar from the get-go! Peeled!
tornado
You had me drenched in the sticky sweetness of your nectar from the get-go! Peeled!
tornado
0
re: Re: Filling The Void
15th May 2012 10:27pm
Re: Filling The Void
15th May 2012 6:43pm
re: Re: Filling The Void
15th May 2012 10:28pm
Thank you My Crim
as always it is an Honor
that you have shared kind words
with me...
thank you.
as always it is an Honor
that you have shared kind words
with me...
thank you.
Landing Big Ones
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2012 11:29pm
15th May 2012 11:28pm
K, this has got to be one of your very best (so far). Straight from the get-go, the peeling of that orange through the language his soul was written in to the 8-limbed beast that bleats and moans in a sacred language. If I ever had any doubt about your ability (and I never did) this would have dispelled them all. You are a true poet, one who can reach inside herself and drag out poems like a fisherman with a gaff brings big fish into the boat. This is erotic, passionate, sensuous, deep .... it goes straight onto my reading list. Bravo!! Red
0
re: Landing Big Ones
15th May 2012 11:46pm
I am humbled by your words.
Most gracious and kind they are.
I am still a student on the platform
of literature and poetry,only striving to
give my perfected imperfections to the best of my ability, and you are one of those in my DUP family
that I learn from continuously.
thank you for reading!
Most gracious and kind they are.
I am still a student on the platform
of literature and poetry,only striving to
give my perfected imperfections to the best of my ability, and you are one of those in my DUP family
that I learn from continuously.
thank you for reading!
Re: Filling The Void
16th May 2012 7:22pm