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I Have My Own Intentions, Mr. Fly
It’s a date with destiny
You and me
I’ve had just about enough
But you ain’t goin anywhere
You like to hang out in here
So this is where you’ll stay
Until I get my way
Go ahead, keep fucking with me
You’ll see
Bad girls finish first
I’ve got all the time on the world
I’m a patient girl
Ask anyone
You and me
I’ve had just about enough
But you ain’t goin anywhere
You like to hang out in here
So this is where you’ll stay
Until I get my way
Go ahead, keep fucking with me
You’ll see
Bad girls finish first
I’ve got all the time on the world
I’m a patient girl
Ask anyone
Published 2nd Sep 2024
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nba_CWSAmrs
Video this afternoon of me and Mr. Fly.
I’m annoyed. He’s met his match. Since he likes to hang out in there I barricaded him in there. I’m stuck in the house today, so yeah. Ignore my hands, they’re trashed. I just moved back to my apartment and I’ve been ripping open boxes.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nba_CWSAmrs
Video this afternoon of me and Mr. Fly.
I’m annoyed. He’s met his match. Since he likes to hang out in there I barricaded him in there. I’m stuck in the house today, so yeah. Ignore my hands, they’re trashed. I just moved back to my apartment and I’ve been ripping open boxes.
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2nd Sep 2024 6:16pm
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2nd Sep 2024 6:39pm
Girl yes, flies are pesky as hell. You thought you caught them and boom they fly away. Just sucking up everything, blood included.
2nd Sep 2024 11:26pm
2nd Sep 2024 7:19pm
I think you have lost the plot
watched the video
sorry but I was laughing
the poem was great btw
watched the video
sorry but I was laughing
the poem was great btw
2nd Sep 2024 11:26pm
2nd Sep 2024 8:09pm
Your words are filled with a simmering intensity, a sense of a battle brewing between you and the fly. The repetition of "you" emphasizes your determination and the fly's seeming indifference. The threat of "bad girls finishing first" suggests a darker undercurrent, perhaps a hint of violence or retribution. The poem is a fascinating exploration of human-insect interaction, but also a reflection on power dynamics and the lengths we might go to assert control. Go for some Good Poems here:https://nighttimewonders.com/
2nd Sep 2024 11:27pm
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3rd Sep 2024 4:26am
We've had them in the shop both at work and at home, we can't function until we are rid of any freaking flies. There's also a humor to this that we love. Tight
3rd Sep 2024 11:34am
