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Heartbeat
I wait and count heartbeats
With every beat, you move closer
I plead for it to speed up
It refuses me like a stubborn child
The anticipation of feeling you against me
It causes my mind to run through possibilities
You lean in with parted lips
The sweet, sultry breath I inhale as you exhale
One more beat, and you're mine.
My heart stops, as well as space and time
The moment we touch timid lips
I taste your thoughts and chase it
I delved in to seek, in search
Of my heart, not realizing
Not able to comprehend
For my heart to beat
You must say the word
Mine.
With every beat, you move closer
I plead for it to speed up
It refuses me like a stubborn child
The anticipation of feeling you against me
It causes my mind to run through possibilities
You lean in with parted lips
The sweet, sultry breath I inhale as you exhale
One more beat, and you're mine.
My heart stops, as well as space and time
The moment we touch timid lips
I taste your thoughts and chase it
I delved in to seek, in search
Of my heart, not realizing
Not able to comprehend
For my heart to beat
You must say the word
Mine.
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1st Sep 2024 3:33am
Wow. Very steamy write. This is phenomenally written, Fia. Appreciate you.
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1st Sep 2024 7:43am
Like the build up, and the enigmatic ending which would make the reader guess what your word might be.
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3rd Sep 2024 00:16am
Great writing.
Completely immersive. Felt it all!
The anticipation, the chase, and the finale:)
just wonderful!
All kisses should be this seductive.
Completely immersive. Felt it all!
The anticipation, the chase, and the finale:)
just wonderful!
All kisses should be this seductive.
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3rd Sep 2024 00:27am