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Blood Moon
Locked inside these four walls
Where whispers speak in riddles
Across tender skin agony crawls
Nesting with a fear that cripples
Shallow promises gutting hope
Better believe in something soon
Time hangs from a serpents rope
Battered beneath a blood moon
Where whispers speak in riddles
Across tender skin agony crawls
Nesting with a fear that cripples
Shallow promises gutting hope
Better believe in something soon
Time hangs from a serpents rope
Battered beneath a blood moon
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Just Musing
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Re. Blood Moon
22nd Aug 2024 5:59am
Very solid and lucid. Your language here is clean, as I can imagine scenic variety, adjunct with certain death, in anticipation. I like how it unfolds in the end. Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Re. Blood Moon
23rd Aug 2024 3:56am
Thanks so much for your commentary and continued support. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. Blood Moon
22nd Aug 2024 11:39am
Outstanding! This really spoke to me
Especially - across tender skin agony crawls.
Nesting with a fear that cripples.
Oh and image outrageously cool
Especially - across tender skin agony crawls.
Nesting with a fear that cripples.
Oh and image outrageously cool
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Re: Re. Blood Moon
23rd Aug 2024 3:58am
Thanks so much for your commentary and kind words. Most of all your continued support. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. Blood Moon
22nd Aug 2024 1:25pm
Re: Re. Blood Moon
23rd Aug 2024 3:59am
Thanks so much for your commentary and continued support. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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Re: Re. Blood Moon
23rd Aug 2024 4:01am
Thanks so much for your commentary and kind words. Most of all your continued support. It really means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re: Re. Blood Moon
23rd Aug 2024 4:02am
Re. Blood Moon
23rd Aug 2024 4:25am
Dear DL,
“Shallow promises gutting hope” how piercing this phrase is. How often one encounters this without fully expressing the disappointment of it. To me, each line in this write holds way more meaning than what greets the eye. Terrific writing. H🌷
“Shallow promises gutting hope” how piercing this phrase is. How often one encounters this without fully expressing the disappointment of it. To me, each line in this write holds way more meaning than what greets the eye. Terrific writing. H🌷
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Re: Re. Blood Moon
23rd Aug 2024 5:52am
Thanks so much for your commentary and kind words. But most of all your continued support. Appreciate you.
DL
DL