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Laughs on them
Fuck men
There is nothing in this world that can satisfy me, more then me
But I play with men
like they play with women
They're toys, used for a good fuck
I use them and toss them out as soon my orgasam has been had
I used to think there was good men out there
But now I see
Men are toys used to be fucked
And tossed out before they start with all their noise
No time for men or boys
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Re: Laughs on them
Anonymous
14th May 2012 3:46am
Haha : )
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Grrrrrrrrrrrrr......
Anonymous
14th May 2012 5:17am
.....love it when you chew us up, Miss GG
:-)
dp
:-)
dp
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re: Grrrrrrrrrrrrr......
14th May 2012 5:23am
Re: Laughs on them
14th May 2012 6:57am
sounds very much like the bitterness of a woman scorned always reminded that two wrongs never make a right enjoyed the anger
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Gg
15th May 2012 6:48pm
you have such strength and it comes across in your poems..you roarrr beautiful lioness..peace Crim :)
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Re: Laughs on them
16th May 2012 11:27pm
I feel pathetic that I didn't read it when I first seen it :) I can definitely relate to this feeling!
I think all women can relate, it's a simple piece but very clear in it's message, Love the simplicity with the rawness! It's almost like a speech for a woman's rally to not get fucked over! I love it! Empowering!
I think all women can relate, it's a simple piece but very clear in it's message, Love the simplicity with the rawness! It's almost like a speech for a woman's rally to not get fucked over! I love it! Empowering!
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re: Re: Laughs on them
17th May 2012 00:53am
Slam poetry?
Anonymous
25th May 2012 3:48am
It's been awhile since I seen that kind of poetic style. Oh damn, I made a rhyme. That ought to tell you how much time I spend on here. Oh, double-damn! I'm out. Loved it:)
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Re: Laughs on them
told ye before, there's a lesbian in my soul. the ways
my fellow dolts perceive Life/Love
truly makes me Sad...& damnear always has.
I been oft tempted to piss on fellers overhearing standard nor'mal textbook 'lockeroom' chatter d'arrested-at-adolescence(dis)consciousness.
butt whathfuck do I-Know ?
It is what It is, mos'likely gonna stay that'a'way
goodly good ballsy write, mdear
my fellow dolts perceive Life/Love
truly makes me Sad...& damnear always has.
I been oft tempted to piss on fellers overhearing standard nor'mal textbook 'lockeroom' chatter d'arrested-at-adolescence(dis)consciousness.
butt whathfuck do I-Know ?
It is what It is, mos'likely gonna stay that'a'way
goodly good ballsy write, mdear
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re: Re: Laughs on them
18th Jun 2012 6:09am