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My old flame
A girl I went out with a long time ago is lying on a table with her shirt off
I'm trying to kiss her stomach but she's extremely hot to the touch
Another girl I was having sex with moments before comes into the same room
The girl on the table sits up and says to the other girl, "Leave now or you'll end up like me, Dead!"
I'm trying to kiss her stomach but she's extremely hot to the touch
Another girl I was having sex with moments before comes into the same room
The girl on the table sits up and says to the other girl, "Leave now or you'll end up like me, Dead!"
Published 19th Aug 2024
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19th Aug 2024 12:33pm
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19th Aug 2024 3:26pm
19th Aug 2024 3:27pm
Hey if it made you think, then that's all that matters. I appreciate you!
19th Aug 2024 4:16pm
This was very odd, but I liked it.
Guess being dead isn't always noticed, haha
Guess being dead isn't always noticed, haha
19th Aug 2024 4:44pm
19th Aug 2024 5:28pm
20th Aug 2024 00:40am
I tried to have a few twists in this one. Glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you Thor. Thanks!
