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Not Sweet
Drop those petals
One by one
The sun has set
My nature is coming undone
Drop that stem
Nothing should be in our way
I listen to contrite issues
Your body is where I wanna stay
Bend over that couch
Show me I'm not the only one in need
This will not be slow
I will enter you with speed
Silence your cell
Lock the doors
Not heaven or hell
Will want to see what's in store
You have doubts
I see it in your eyes
There is no escape
What I want is between your thighs
Ohh you wanna scream
Be a good girl and do it
I wanna be your dream
But if I’m not I don't give a shit
I did what you asked
I'm a yes man to that idiot
So give me that ass
What I went through today you forfeited it
You've been begging me for weeks
To take you down and dirty
Why are you standing there sweets
No more playing and being flirty
You say you're a writer
Tonight, I'm giving you something to write
If I don't give you something that will inspire
At least I will put up fight.
Are you ready
Now is the time
Let that food burn
On your pussy I will dine
One by one
The sun has set
My nature is coming undone
Drop that stem
Nothing should be in our way
I listen to contrite issues
Your body is where I wanna stay
Bend over that couch
Show me I'm not the only one in need
This will not be slow
I will enter you with speed
Silence your cell
Lock the doors
Not heaven or hell
Will want to see what's in store
You have doubts
I see it in your eyes
There is no escape
What I want is between your thighs
Ohh you wanna scream
Be a good girl and do it
I wanna be your dream
But if I’m not I don't give a shit
I did what you asked
I'm a yes man to that idiot
So give me that ass
What I went through today you forfeited it
You've been begging me for weeks
To take you down and dirty
Why are you standing there sweets
No more playing and being flirty
You say you're a writer
Tonight, I'm giving you something to write
If I don't give you something that will inspire
At least I will put up fight.
Are you ready
Now is the time
Let that food burn
On your pussy I will dine
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Re. Not Sweet
17th Aug 2024 00:06am
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Re. Not Sweet
17th Aug 2024 00:06am
Goddamn! Fanfuckingtastic! What a piece of hot XXX! Well said. I'm hearing, seeing & feeling you loud & clear!
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Re. Not Sweet
17th Aug 2024 00:08am
wowee beautiful this is really hot and I love the commanding tone of it that's sexy 💕
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17th Aug 2024 7:54am
Rhyming comment also inspired by the picture:
Hot commanding tone -
how much she will moan!
Hot commanding tone -
how much she will moan!
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Anonymous
17th Aug 2024 10:23pm
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Re. Not Sweet
20th Aug 2024 8:39pm
At first I didn't understand the title until I read the poem, not only do I get it now but I'm glad I read it. I love when femininity and masculinity can find a balance. What I mean by that is your tone was aggressive which I felt to be masculine however your words and emotions behind those words were feminine. Very lovely.
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