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Huah

flying discs and dogs who chase them
my dashboard coffee waits
idle conversations lacing
interwoven fates

channeling a spinning spiral
a vortex, karma's lush
interactions going viral,
in a collective hush

while slowly the Sun slips lower
in the summer sky
I'm in a park in which I know a
simple reason why

people come in ancient tribute
to the only one
deity no one can refute
giving life, the Sun

I know you know, you know I know
unheard and too unseen
that together is a way that we grow
what is from what has been

while channeling a spinning spiral
a vortex filled with lush
interactions going viral
in a collective hush...
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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