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Jack and Lilly in Legend
The sun smiles
the clouds weep
as I run in through the forest
it is you I seek
They do not know
lips are sealed
Until it meets yours
and the magic we weld
I call out your name
As I run in the meadow
little wishes float in the sun
I hope one is bestowed
You appear my young lover
my heart can now beat
You hold me in your arms
and our lips meet.
""Have you been sweet or were you tart?"
I giggle in his arms
He knew the answer
from the start.
"I am no sweet thing to be placed high above
I am no tart that you can take as you will my love
I am the blood in your veins
that brings you life
I am the one who has waited for you
My whole life."
the clouds weep
as I run in through the forest
it is you I seek
They do not know
lips are sealed
Until it meets yours
and the magic we weld
I call out your name
As I run in the meadow
little wishes float in the sun
I hope one is bestowed
You appear my young lover
my heart can now beat
You hold me in your arms
and our lips meet.
""Have you been sweet or were you tart?"
I giggle in his arms
He knew the answer
from the start.
"I am no sweet thing to be placed high above
I am no tart that you can take as you will my love
I am the blood in your veins
that brings you life
I am the one who has waited for you
My whole life."
Author's Note
Musings after watching the movie
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Re. Jack and Lilly in Legend
5th Aug 2024 00:53am
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5th Aug 2024 00:54am
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5th Aug 2024 1:04am
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5th Aug 2024 2:46am
Omg I remember that movie. Tom Cruise was a baby! Great interpretation of a great movie
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5th Aug 2024 3:03pm
Re. Jack and Lilly in Legend
5th Aug 2024 2:51am
Brilliant write. Stellar wordplay per usual. Dig it. Appreciate you.
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5th Aug 2024 3:03pm
Re. Jack and Lilly in Legend
5th Aug 2024 11:09am
Never seen the film, but what a great poem as a source of guidance to the film. Cool poem.
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5th Aug 2024 3:04pm
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Re. Jack and Lilly in Legend
5th Aug 2024 3:51pm
One of the oldest fantasy movies, starring T.cruise, sprites, and elves fill the decor of the movie,
a fairy tale for those sharply romantic, but it was a success back then...i remember
Love is reported missing nowadays..thanks for the read Fia..
a fairy tale for those sharply romantic, but it was a success back then...i remember
Love is reported missing nowadays..thanks for the read Fia..
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5th Aug 2024 3:55pm
Re. Jack and Lilly in Legend
I love that movie! This wove that vibe all the way through.
Quick question...did you mean weld or wield? Either works, just curious. 😊
Quick question...did you mean weld or wield? Either works, just curious. 😊
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6th Aug 2024 4:38pm