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It's No Sonnet!
I remember long ago
When the first snow fell
When my cheeks blushed from a glance
As time went by
That was the moment
Where my hopes were big
My eyes glazed over
And his love was a fairytale -
Meant for another!
I wanted to believe in fairytales
I was no Princess
But he...
Definitely a frog!
When the first snow fell
When my cheeks blushed from a glance
As time went by
That was the moment
Where my hopes were big
My eyes glazed over
And his love was a fairytale -
Meant for another!
I wanted to believe in fairytales
I was no Princess
But he...
Definitely a frog!
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 4th Aug 2024
Author's Note
Something a little light hearted
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Re. Not a Sonnet
4th Aug 2024 4:14pm
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4th Aug 2024 4:16pm
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4th Aug 2024 4:18pm
Re. Not a Sonnet
4th Aug 2024 4:29pm
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4th Aug 2024 6:29pm
Re. Not a Sonnet
Anonymous
4th Aug 2024 4:33pm
Fun telling of a theme so many of us understand. Great write!
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4th Aug 2024 6:30pm
Re. Not a Sonnet
4th Aug 2024 6:06pm
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4th Aug 2024 6:30pm
Re. It's No Sonnet!
4th Aug 2024 6:44pm
I love this cute little bittersweet ditty, Fia. Despite the obvious comedy, there is an undercurrent of sadness here. Great choice of artwork too. Fantastic! 😊
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4th Aug 2024 6:48pm
Re. It's No Sonnet!
4th Aug 2024 7:12pm
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4th Aug 2024 7:15pm
Re. It's No Sonnet!
Fun sad tale to tell inverse which makes it a soulful account
Good riddance !
Good riddance !
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4th Aug 2024 8:48pm
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4th Aug 2024 8:49pm
Re. It's No Sonnet!
5th Aug 2024 2:45am
Very cute, there are a lot of frogs out there. But no reason for you to not also be a princess. Well told.
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5th Aug 2024 3:05pm
Re. It's No Sonnet!
5th Aug 2024 5:22am
Dig this lighthearted write. Really loved the ending as well. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
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5th Aug 2024 3:05pm