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speaking from past experience
living merely in the present is hopelessly unwrapping
something you’ll never get to open
Published 2nd Aug 2024
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3rd Aug 2024 9:03pm
Time is the one dimension that allows development of the wisdom required to understand the profound nature of phrasing like this. Immortal beings must be kind of stupid, right? Why or how would they ever need to develop the necessary mental depth it takes to grasp at meaning like this? God must be an eternal child. Great stuff!
4th Aug 2024 6:16pm
Love this, Paul. There is the present moment, but hope will always be a child of the future.
