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Practice Bars 2

So buzzed - it's insane.  
Smoked up - hit the J.  
Flow comes - NBA.  
Post up - hit the J.  
 
Shawty "hit on me", like she put a hit on me.  
Surely "Swiss army", I'm "reserved to switch on," see.  
 
Her face was "drag" like cheap queer.  
She made Bruh "gag" like cheap beer.  
Her taste was "ass" like seat smeared.  
She may be "had" like scheme here.  
 
Y'all got "dive bars" - poor service.  
Dawg gon' "bite hard" on "curbed kicks."  
I've got white, tar, more Sherm sticks.  
All the nines, cars, whores, furnished.  

Strapped beneath - gun is across.
"Packing heat" - sun in a box.
Jab and weave - "punches" that "box."
Rappers "beat" - drums at the loss.
 
Let me stress your position.  
Never question the given.  
Mess and wreck your condition.  
Wesson "swept" as if kitchen.
 
Got a "handle" in these "bars" like Tito's.
Got a "handle" in these "bars" like wheels roll.
Got a "handle" in these "bars" like real gold.
Got some Xanax and a car with kilos.

Knowing artistic craft.
Honing consists of maps.
Molding logistic drafts.
Zoning specific graph.
Written by Connotation
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Author's Note
Just some practice writing in the style of hip hop lyricism.
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