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What It Looks Like
This is what it looks like
This is how the heartbreaks
Take a look at a golden soul turned black
From a little bit too much give and just not enough take
I’ve been changed in ways that cannot be undone
Parts of me will never be revived
These are the consequences that I must accept
For going back to a lifestyle I was more than blessed to have once already survived
This is how the heartbreaks
Take a look at a golden soul turned black
From a little bit too much give and just not enough take
I’ve been changed in ways that cannot be undone
Parts of me will never be revived
These are the consequences that I must accept
For going back to a lifestyle I was more than blessed to have once already survived
Published 1st Aug 2024
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16th Feb 2025 7:22pm
That's a raw and regretful reflection on a painful lesson learned. It's got a strong sense of disillusionment and a feeling of irreversible damage. The 'golden soul turned black' image is really powerful.
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Apr 2025 11:45pm
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