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He Comes To Me In The Wind (with Darrow)
The wind whispers to me
announcing my destiny
As if kissed by a fallen feather
I feel you drawing nearer
And nearer, the wind blows me to you
A presence felt, not seen
I am chosen,
As a keeper of light,
Your ardent gaze I see,
looking up at me in glee,
In joyous delight
You have found me
I have waited so long, and I have longed
For this moment
For you
announcing my destiny
As if kissed by a fallen feather
I feel you drawing nearer
And nearer, the wind blows me to you
A presence felt, not seen
I am chosen,
As a keeper of light,
Your ardent gaze I see,
looking up at me in glee,
In joyous delight
You have found me
I have waited so long, and I have longed
For this moment
For you
Author's Note
Thank you for the collaboration, Darrow
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Re. He come on to me on the Wind with Darrow
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I have always loved simplicity, the ways the feelings are carried, ad the diction that conveys them.
Nice poetry Fia, stay happy and lovely. with your fellow collaborater .Hamid
Nice poetry Fia, stay happy and lovely. with your fellow collaborater .Hamid
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We like the blending of the two, each being the light sought and waited for by the other. Tight
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31st Jul 2024 8:31pm
A presence felt not seen, is a good start. Enjoyed this gentle yet hopeful offering. Nice job you two!
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👏 👏 👏 👏 absolutely brilliant 👏 and very beautiful queen 👸 please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
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