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The Constance of Sorrow
That year, sadness swiftly swept,
through the corridors of my soul.
Turbulent tears torrentially cold.
Yet finches and sparrows land songs,
deep inside my trembling marrow.
Hope is vulnerably bold.
The way its enigma unfolds.
With nature loose in my heart
I cannot feel the constance of sorrow.
through the corridors of my soul.
Turbulent tears torrentially cold.
Yet finches and sparrows land songs,
deep inside my trembling marrow.
Hope is vulnerably bold.
The way its enigma unfolds.
With nature loose in my heart
I cannot feel the constance of sorrow.
Published 27th Jul 2024
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27th Jul 2024 6:25pm
So, you are now over the sorrow and hope has taken its place. Nice spill. Fia xoxo
27th Jul 2024 6:30pm
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27th Jul 2024 6:59pm
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27th Jul 2024 7:28pm
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28th Jul 2024 00:17am
What a beautiful but sad poem. The wording and image work perfectly. Very creative & very authentic.
28th Jul 2024 00:23am
Thanks so much, that's where I'm at - I am sad.
But I try to have hope and that usually comes from nature.
But I try to have hope and that usually comes from nature.
28th Jul 2024 00:44am
The alliteration in lines 1, and 3 really made the stanza move. Well penned, my friend.
28th Jul 2024 1:40pm
28th Jul 2024 1:41am
Wow, what a power close. I know those last two lines will call back to me when I need them. Beautiful.
28th Jul 2024 1:42pm
28th Jul 2024 5:46am
What a powerful yet dark piece, the picture fits it perfectly.
...where would we be without nature and poetry?
...where would we be without nature and poetry?
28th Jul 2024 1:45pm
Nature and poetry keep me going, soothe my anxiety
Thank you for nice comments!
Thank you for nice comments!
28th Jul 2024 9:44pm
And one of those skulls still has its own hair. Amazing! The sound & look of nature can be soothing, I agree. 😊
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