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A Cold Emptiness
As the sunlight dies
In cold empty darkness
Stillness of the grave
What the ruins remember
Through time and memory
Death appears through the windblown storm
Where the flame is eternal
Awakening
In cold empty darkness
Stillness of the grave
What the ruins remember
Through time and memory
Death appears through the windblown storm
Where the flame is eternal
Awakening
Published 26th Jul 2024
Author's Note
For the windblown comp
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26th Jul 2024 7:54pm
The way you are describing the cold is perfect. The words of dies, darkness, graves, memory sends chills. Very well written. Fia xoxo
(Good luck on comp)
(Good luck on comp)
27th Jul 2024 10:44am
Appreciate that Fia. Always great to hear from you. Thanks for the RL
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