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atmospheric inhales
Lightning cracks
rain sprinkles down
cool and gentle
the atmosphere trembles
in anticipation
I want to feel
the windblown bent
of the trees like I'm one of them
at the mercy of the elements
trying to sweep me off my feet
rain sprinkles down
cool and gentle
the atmosphere trembles
in anticipation
I want to feel
the windblown bent
of the trees like I'm one of them
at the mercy of the elements
trying to sweep me off my feet
Published 26th Jul 2024
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Written for the Windblown competition
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- Edited 7th Sep 2024 3:45pm
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31st Jul 2024 1:59am
Great stuff. I love storms and ain't scared to be out in one. (I'm foolish).
This write captures all of that perfectly. And a very worthy entry, worth winning.
This write captures all of that perfectly. And a very worthy entry, worth winning.
31st Jul 2024 8:48am
Thank you 😊 Storms always make me feel so alive. The prompt was perfect for this.
