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The Wave
Shuttering core
head spinning round
furious flutter
no sense of ground
am not floating
drowning in air
unable to breathe
racing stare
fierce battle
waging within
frozen limbs
cannot begin
anxiety crippling
sweaty drench
smothering
putrid stench
deep impact
wheeling swiftly
losing grip
ever quickly
familiar space
survival mode
here again
never slowed
head spinning round
furious flutter
no sense of ground
am not floating
drowning in air
unable to breathe
racing stare
fierce battle
waging within
frozen limbs
cannot begin
anxiety crippling
sweaty drench
smothering
putrid stench
deep impact
wheeling swiftly
losing grip
ever quickly
familiar space
survival mode
here again
never slowed
Published 24th Jul 2024
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25th Jul 2024 00:43am
26th Jul 2024 5:26pm
Thank you lovely Ahavati. I am stronger than I seem in this piece. I always appreciate your encouragement:)
Bless
Mel
Bless
Mel
25th Jul 2024 5:56am
26th Jul 2024 5:27pm
25th Jul 2024 6:48am
Sending you positive energy. Brilliantly written. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
26th Jul 2024 5:28pm
25th Jul 2024 8:00pm
'' familiar space
survival mode
here again
never slowed ''
Great dismount!!
Luvin this!!
survival mode
here again
never slowed ''
Great dismount!!
Luvin this!!
26th Jul 2024 5:29pm
