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Chocolate Teapot
What am I a chocolate teapot?
An empty sentence without a dot?
I melt when you say “hi”
And bleed after a final goodbye.
I never imagined you would leave
Not caring when my heart you deceive.
I didn’t expect I was so useless.
I didn’t exist to you I was worthless.
A dark shadow that one single night
A mirage you laughed at in spite.
To be used then discarded
I thought I was loved or regarded.
I was wrong.
And this is my song.
For those of you who think you have found
Love. It’s just a sound in an empty background
An empty sentence without a dot?
I melt when you say “hi”
And bleed after a final goodbye.
I never imagined you would leave
Not caring when my heart you deceive.
I didn’t expect I was so useless.
I didn’t exist to you I was worthless.
A dark shadow that one single night
A mirage you laughed at in spite.
To be used then discarded
I thought I was loved or regarded.
I was wrong.
And this is my song.
For those of you who think you have found
Love. It’s just a sound in an empty background
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Re. Chocolate Teapot
24th Jul 2024 8:36pm
Why ya gotta go and do that?
All kidding aside, this is exquisite in the ache, Sam.
All kidding aside, this is exquisite in the ache, Sam.
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24th Jul 2024 8:38pm
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25th Jul 2024 5:55am
Yes mistress… OUCH… but you said no spanking ….
Ok ok I left it… I left it… geeez
Ok ok I left it… I left it… geeez
Re: Re. Chocolate Teapot
25th Jul 2024 1:56pm
You know you are one of the people I adore, Sam. Your suffering is not meant to be taken lightly. We joke because we have to. I understand all too well.
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24th Jul 2024 9:27pm
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Re. Chocolate Teapot
24th Jul 2024 10:10pm
The image of a chocolate teapot is perfect for this. Melting into nothing. So hard when one plays another for their own ends. So much ouch in this one
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25th Jul 2024 5:47am
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Re. Chocolate Teapot
25th Jul 2024 1:08am
This is fantastic. We've all been there, but that doesn't make it hurt any less when it happens.
Great analogies and rhyming. Wonderful ink.
Great analogies and rhyming. Wonderful ink.
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25th Jul 2024 5:49am
Re. Chocolate Teapot
25th Jul 2024 2:50am
Oh sweet Sam, I really know how you feel.
Let it in. Let it hurt. Let it go. There are better things out there, and your heart needs to make room for them. Trust me... it gets better.
I'm sorry you feel like this. It's a total bag of ass to feel thrown away.
Be well, Sam.
Let it in. Let it hurt. Let it go. There are better things out there, and your heart needs to make room for them. Trust me... it gets better.
I'm sorry you feel like this. It's a total bag of ass to feel thrown away.
Be well, Sam.
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Re: Re. Chocolate Teapot
25th Jul 2024 5:52am
So I’m a total bag of ass… wow… I knew you liked me a little… but we really have to sit and talk … a lot…… just kidding…
I’m always well… when you’re around
I’m always well… when you’re around
Re. Chocolate Teapot
25th Jul 2024 8:48am
You weren't wrong, it's wrong to treat you this way - no one deserves to be used then discarded. It's a painful read cause I know what it feels like to be treated like trash, and there's little I can write that offfers some comfort, so let me hug you tightly in thoughts.
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25th Jul 2024 4:31pm
well, i'll take that hug... then we can proceed from there... wait WHAT?!?!? in thoughts!?!? why in thoughts?1?1? why ? why? why?
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26th Jul 2024 10:04am
Cause there's an ocean between us and my arms aren't long enough. That's why.
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