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How I Leaned To Love The Bomb Of Knowledge And Cause Worrying In My Audience
The elongated eruditeness of the educated elitists confers a palpable penchant for tumults of tyrannical transcendental malevolent malignant motivation upon the troglodyte troupe.
Said the over-learned-book to the initiate question.
And then told the
once-known,
well-known,
ill-in-bed
story as follows:
Once upon a stool was an insinuation
who exited a conversation
into the punched pecan monetary carjack.
And was thrice thusly juiced until
it was after the before of march.
The moral is to is not about and around
the inside of the dodecahedron particle-collider colander.
Have a very nice purple tuesday only half its twice length.
-From the desk of the notebook's desk under the bottom of the sky.
There spoke nonsense and too-much sense
For one told lies to all ears
And the other brought tears
So the real story is to suit occasion
And make sense or nonsense in fitting tense.
Said the over-learned-book to the initiate question.
And then told the
once-known,
well-known,
ill-in-bed
story as follows:
Once upon a stool was an insinuation
who exited a conversation
into the punched pecan monetary carjack.
And was thrice thusly juiced until
it was after the before of march.
The moral is to is not about and around
the inside of the dodecahedron particle-collider colander.
Have a very nice purple tuesday only half its twice length.
-From the desk of the notebook's desk under the bottom of the sky.
There spoke nonsense and too-much sense
For one told lies to all ears
And the other brought tears
So the real story is to suit occasion
And make sense or nonsense in fitting tense.
Written by
Viddax
(Lord Viddax)
Published 12th May 2012
| Edited 13th May 2012
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12th May 2012 1:05am
um... i think your a tad out of my league with sense but i love you anyway.. meauuu... which means i wish i could be on your level.=)
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12th May 2012 1:17am
Its not all fun and games up here beyond cloud nine. Sometimes there's entertainment as well. This is one of those anti-scholar poems: The titles based on a film called "How I Learnt To Love The Bomb And Stop Worrying". I would explain the rest but its purpose is to annoy and confuse those who seek meaning.
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12th May 2012 5:40am
"The elongated eruditeness of the educated elitists confers a palpable penchant for tumults of tyrannical transcendental malevolent malignant motivation upon the troglodyte troup."
Haha, you should say this to goodest, I hear he loves those big words!
I am sure if I read this enough, I might understand some of it...maybe I will come back when it is not midnight, however, when I read it out loud, it had a great flow to it.
Haha, you should say this to goodest, I hear he loves those big words!
I am sure if I read this enough, I might understand some of it...maybe I will come back when it is not midnight, however, when I read it out loud, it had a great flow to it.
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13th May 2012 00:08am
I do believe godly Goodest did get to peruse this poem in part, the long line of woeful words that is. The actual point of this is purely for me to understand and the audience to run rampant in riot over misunderstanding.
:)
12th May 2012 7:41am
Lord
You had me at 'troglodyte troup.'
I had to get the dictionary. The title
was of great appeal to me for the hidden
reference to the Kubrick masterpiece.
The first read reminded me of Nietzsche.
Dense. It needs a few more looks. I will
remember this as one write which made me
retreat for my sheer failure to comprehend.
Sumeet
You had me at 'troglodyte troup.'
I had to get the dictionary. The title
was of great appeal to me for the hidden
reference to the Kubrick masterpiece.
The first read reminded me of Nietzsche.
Dense. It needs a few more looks. I will
remember this as one write which made me
retreat for my sheer failure to comprehend.
Sumeet
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13th May 2012 00:10am
And you had me at 'Lord'. Lovely bit of film with Peter Sellers in multiple roles, much like "The Mouse That Roared". To be more Nietzschean it would have something positive, if maybe elitist, to say, in German.
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Anonymous
12th May 2012 3:35pm
A very surreal poem which has the verbal jousting of a passage from James Joyce. Whether or not one can work out what the hell's going on the style itself is easy enough to wallow in.
I see the poem as being about snobs who use language to keep those they consider proles at arm's length, ironically presented in a needlessly dense manner. It works as clever satire, and is also just a very rich broth of language. One could spend a lot of time happily mining each line.
Some thoughts: Should "eruditeness" be "erudition" in the first sentence?
At the end of that sentence "troup" should have an "e" after it.
Thanks for the read, Viddax.
I see the poem as being about snobs who use language to keep those they consider proles at arm's length, ironically presented in a needlessly dense manner. It works as clever satire, and is also just a very rich broth of language. One could spend a lot of time happily mining each line.
Some thoughts: Should "eruditeness" be "erudition" in the first sentence?
At the end of that sentence "troup" should have an "e" after it.
Thanks for the read, Viddax.
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13th May 2012 00:15am
And even though I try to speak from the high heavens it would have to fall to you to show up my mortal mistake of misspelling. I chose 'eruditeness' as it pertains to being owned by the elitists, rather than elitists who are erudite.
Other than that you are close but no banana with your analysis. For the snobs sneer at simpletons but make no followers with their sound-out.
Other than that you are close but no banana with your analysis. For the snobs sneer at simpletons but make no followers with their sound-out.
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14th May 2012 2:12am
"There spoke nonsense and too-much sense
For one told lies to all ears
And the other brought tears
So the real story is to suit occasion
And make sense or nonsense in fitting tense."
evidently true
very good read and i got to google many words, new words in my vocab today!
For one told lies to all ears
And the other brought tears
So the real story is to suit occasion
And make sense or nonsense in fitting tense."
evidently true
very good read and i got to google many words, new words in my vocab today!
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14th May 2012 2:22am
Damn and blast! Thou hast learnt from my nonsense! The philosopher in me shouts poem while the poet in a twist of feelings try to philosophise.
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14th May 2012 2:42am
Is it bad that... I understand every word without the need for a dictionary?
/forever alone nerd face
/forever alone nerd face
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14th May 2012 2:47am
Then at least you can join me the poet, rather than the audience. Or is this a further lesson in how knowledgy gets little friends, while ignorance is at the party in bliss.
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14th May 2012 2:50am
Aaah, but see when you're with the knowledge table instead of the ignorance party, you can all chuckle about complex jokes with large vocabulary and how someone inanely attempted to insult you with a word that has no definition pertaining to their sentence structure and have a laugh at their derogatory statements. (:
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