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Nature
The evening breeze
Lingers
In the trees
How they sigh
Like the seas
Which also know
The playful touch
Of all the wind’s
Tender moods,
And revel in them much
Lingers
In the trees
How they sigh
Like the seas
Which also know
The playful touch
Of all the wind’s
Tender moods,
And revel in them much
Published 18th Jul 2024
Author's Note
Just trying a bit of coherent rhyming
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18th Jul 2024 10:32am
18th Jul 2024 8:30pm
Trees are one of my favorite things. I love the calm that settled within me as I read this.
Thank you for posting.
Thank you for posting.
19th Jul 2024 8:54pm
Dear TMW,
Well done. I enjoyed the rhyming, the meter and the subject matter for sure. Soothing and comforting piece. H🌷
Well done. I enjoyed the rhyming, the meter and the subject matter for sure. Soothing and comforting piece. H🌷
