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Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
There is thunder
inside me
My heartbeat
beats loudly
Chaotically
(for)
My God
My Lover
I descend, upon her
My hands extend soft lightning
from my fingers, to
Her chest rising, swelling
Blending angst with hunger
Equality within our needs
So in tuned
with my needs and
the rocking headboard
he occasionally bangs
his head on
Overly eager, but I
try to compensate
with calm whispers
Though as deep voiced
as I am inside her
In sync with harmony
and bed sheet music
Together inside
Our bedroom
Our Garden of Eden
Where we grow, we swell
with torrential outbursts
of blinding colors
As we touch foreheads
trying to see what
the other sees
Where my arms
and legs resemble
tendrils of ivy and rapture
Wrapping around
his back and hips
expanding in every direction
trying to hold onto
this moment
this place
-Of intense desire
I wish you could feel
what I feel
in you
Where I'm
no longer human
I'm pure divine energy
Feeding off him
tempting him
to take me
into the Edge
of Eden
As we shove aside linens
and bare ourselves
to any envious divinity
Let the sheen of our sweat
be our shield
from judgemental angels
Who know not what they miss
Ever since they removed us
from their garden
So they watch
as we rub it in.
inside me
My heartbeat
beats loudly
Chaotically
(for)
My God
My Lover
I descend, upon her
My hands extend soft lightning
from my fingers, to
Her chest rising, swelling
Blending angst with hunger
Equality within our needs
So in tuned
with my needs and
the rocking headboard
he occasionally bangs
his head on
Overly eager, but I
try to compensate
with calm whispers
Though as deep voiced
as I am inside her
In sync with harmony
and bed sheet music
Together inside
Our bedroom
Our Garden of Eden
Where we grow, we swell
with torrential outbursts
of blinding colors
As we touch foreheads
trying to see what
the other sees
Where my arms
and legs resemble
tendrils of ivy and rapture
Wrapping around
his back and hips
expanding in every direction
trying to hold onto
this moment
this place
-Of intense desire
I wish you could feel
what I feel
in you
Where I'm
no longer human
I'm pure divine energy
Feeding off him
tempting him
to take me
into the Edge
of Eden
As we shove aside linens
and bare ourselves
to any envious divinity
Let the sheen of our sweat
be our shield
from judgemental angels
Who know not what they miss
Ever since they removed us
from their garden
So they watch
as we rub it in.
Author's Note
This started out in text flirting and went from there. LOL
Yes. we text each at work. Hope you enjoy:)
Yes. we text each at work. Hope you enjoy:)
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Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
15th Jul 2024 3:20am
Re: Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
15th Jul 2024 3:24am
Hi Her!
Thank you for that.
We try to keep it fun and sexy:)
thank you for the RL too!!
Thank you for that.
We try to keep it fun and sexy:)
thank you for the RL too!!
Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
15th Jul 2024 3:46am
Hey lover.
So is it still called a collaboration if we're re/creating our writes in person?! LOL.
It's definitely lovemaking, even when it's hot and heavy sex. Because before, during, and after, I love you. And I know that you love me. It isn't hidden, it isn't held back.
Our gusto is in so many things. What a great life we are living.
You are everything that a man could ever want. And I'm that man. Lucky me!
Hey, thanks for the teamwork in the write. You make my inspiration flow.
So is it still called a collaboration if we're re/creating our writes in person?! LOL.
It's definitely lovemaking, even when it's hot and heavy sex. Because before, during, and after, I love you. And I know that you love me. It isn't hidden, it isn't held back.
Our gusto is in so many things. What a great life we are living.
You are everything that a man could ever want. And I'm that man. Lucky me!
Hey, thanks for the teamwork in the write. You make my inspiration flow.
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Re: Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
15th Jul 2024 3:55am
Hey hey there!
Yes, my love:)
You inspire me all the time. It feels good to be loved so thoroughly - so I'm taking it! and you are quite the
crafty texter! I had to flex a little bit in order to keep up with you.
Gusto is a great word and so accurate. haha
Almost as good as behoove! Another one of your favorite
words:)
Hey 11 days!!
Yes, my love:)
You inspire me all the time. It feels good to be loved so thoroughly - so I'm taking it! and you are quite the
crafty texter! I had to flex a little bit in order to keep up with you.
Gusto is a great word and so accurate. haha
Almost as good as behoove! Another one of your favorite
words:)
Hey 11 days!!
Re: Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
19th Jul 2024 2:50am
Re: Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
19th Jul 2024 2:54am
Re: Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
19th Jul 2024 2:57am
Re: Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
19th Jul 2024 3:10am
Re: Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
19th Jul 2024 3:14am
Re: Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
19th Jul 2024 3:16am
Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
Dear A and S,
There is so little, or at the very least, not enough love like this that is exciting and full of gratitude. The passion is sizzling. Very nicely blended and lovely to read. H🌷
There is so little, or at the very least, not enough love like this that is exciting and full of gratitude. The passion is sizzling. Very nicely blended and lovely to read. H🌷
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Re: Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
15th Jul 2024 4:19am
Hi H!
Thank you for that. We generally enjoy each other's company.
Sex is the bonus part. hahaha
In my opinion, when you click with someone like that
everything else just naturally follows.
Thank you for the RL lovely one!
Stay awesome!
Thank you for that. We generally enjoy each other's company.
Sex is the bonus part. hahaha
In my opinion, when you click with someone like that
everything else just naturally follows.
Thank you for the RL lovely one!
Stay awesome!
Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
15th Jul 2024 4:31am
Holy balls! That was beautiful, and hot! Girl get me a fan, you are a goddess!
Seriously, the slow burn, the love, the passion and intensity of the intimacy is something the rest of we mortals aspire to… I’m so happy for you.
Fuck! Where’s the fan!
Seriously, the slow burn, the love, the passion and intensity of the intimacy is something the rest of we mortals aspire to… I’m so happy for you.
Fuck! Where’s the fan!
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Re: Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
19th Jul 2024 2:06am
Hi Betty!
Thank you!
Whenever I have some down time, I always send a flirty text. It's so fun to text with someone you feel comfortable with. He's a big tease though!! And he starts it!
So, I feel I must represent on behalf of women and try to leave him speechless. LOL
But not for long. He plays right back, and this is what we
came up with. We both struggle with collaborations.
I'm glad you enjoyed:)
And you are a goddess yourself!!
thanks again!
Thank you!
Whenever I have some down time, I always send a flirty text. It's so fun to text with someone you feel comfortable with. He's a big tease though!! And he starts it!
So, I feel I must represent on behalf of women and try to leave him speechless. LOL
But not for long. He plays right back, and this is what we
came up with. We both struggle with collaborations.
I'm glad you enjoyed:)
And you are a goddess yourself!!
thanks again!
Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
You text at work then you enjoy having sex in the stairwell. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
19th Jul 2024 2:08am
Hi Cisco!
Texting helps with the distance. We don't go to long without
a hello or what ya doing text. hahah
Thanks for the read!
Texting helps with the distance. We don't go to long without
a hello or what ya doing text. hahah
Thanks for the read!
Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
19th Jul 2024 2:19am
Re: Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
19th Jul 2024 2:31am
Hi Damian
thank you that.
It's something we both are trying to figure out.
Collaborations!
thanks for the read amigo!
thank you that.
It's something we both are trying to figure out.
Collaborations!
thanks for the read amigo!
Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
6th Aug 2024 00:19am
And the really great thing is that, theoretically, you can do it all again tomorrow or when you're together of course, lol. I agree, they don't know what they're missin' in the garden of Eden! 😂
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Re: Re. Edge of Eden - collaboration with Styxian
6th Aug 2024 00:32am
Hey Billy!
Collaborations are challenging for me. I thought I'd try it.
Mark and I text all the time, so we do kind of collaborate naturally in a way. I thought we'd try it in a more structured way and came up with this. I'm super duper proud of it and yes, the garden of Eden is awesome!! hehehe
Nice to see ya buddy!
Thanks for the comment
Collaborations are challenging for me. I thought I'd try it.
Mark and I text all the time, so we do kind of collaborate naturally in a way. I thought we'd try it in a more structured way and came up with this. I'm super duper proud of it and yes, the garden of Eden is awesome!! hehehe
Nice to see ya buddy!
Thanks for the comment