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First Kiss
Eyes hyper-focused
Lip's part anticipating
Stop, hold, every breath
Lip's part anticipating
Stop, hold, every breath
Author's Note
Do you remember every first kiss?
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Re. First Kiss
9th Jul 2024 2:19pm
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9th Jul 2024 2:22pm
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9th Jul 2024 2:39pm
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9th Jul 2024 2:45pm
Re. First Kiss
9th Jul 2024 2:41pm
Awkward, nervous, after it was finished, addicting!!
Perfect poem Fia!!
Perfect poem Fia!!
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9th Jul 2024 2:44pm
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9th Jul 2024 3:44pm
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9th Jul 2024 5:07pm
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9th Jul 2024 4:14pm
Oh my, this is so delish…
I have to admit, I actually vomited after my first kiss, right after he stuck his tongue in my mouth. But it was him, I swear! My best friend did too after she kissed him. So, Joey if you’re reading this…yeah, you don’t kiss so good.
I have to admit, I actually vomited after my first kiss, right after he stuck his tongue in my mouth. But it was him, I swear! My best friend did too after she kissed him. So, Joey if you’re reading this…yeah, you don’t kiss so good.
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9th Jul 2024 5:08pm
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9th Jul 2024 4:51pm
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9th Jul 2024 5:09pm
Your very very first yes there is only one. But that first kiss with a new person. That is an experience.
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9th Jul 2024 5:12pm
Do you want a list?
Each one is different.
Some good some bad…
Sometimes you remember the bad more than the good
Each one is different.
Some good some bad…
Sometimes you remember the bad more than the good
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9th Jul 2024 5:31pm
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9th Jul 2024 8:49pm
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9th Jul 2024 8:53pm
Re. First Kiss
9th Jul 2024 10:34pm
YES! I remember. And the second, and the last one this morning. Hugs, love, and kisses, O
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9th Jul 2024 10:37pm
oral you already have me hot and bothered reading your last entry now you are driving me insane. The last kiss this morning.
Feeling parched. need some water. ;)
Feeling parched. need some water. ;)
Re: Re. First Kiss
9th Jul 2024 10:42pm
May I kiss the caldron where fresh water flows and heals parched lips...all lips......OXOX
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Re: Re. First Kiss
9th Jul 2024 10:46pm
Stoke that fire with that mouth and I will give you as much water you want. XOXO
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9th Jul 2024 10:48pm
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9th Jul 2024 10:52pm
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With a guy, it was super gross, like he wanted me to choke on his tongue. With a girl, it was super sweet, but we were so nervous our teeth collided.
With my current partner, I grabbed his face and kissed him, while under a tent at a music festival, and then apologised for not asking first lol.
With my current partner, I grabbed his face and kissed him, while under a tent at a music festival, and then apologised for not asking first lol.
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10th Jul 2024 00:18am
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10th Jul 2024 10:35am