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Talk To Me
Talk to me
Seduce me with your words
Take me to a place, only you know how
Speak in the language of us
Let me close my eyes and feel
Every syllable
Every consonant
Every vowel
Guide me into a world that is ours
A lone
Away from prying eyes
Talk to me
Lead me to where the core of my desire is ignited
Let your words fall into a metered syncopation
In your own language
Describe the nuance of a touch
Make me crave you
Remind me of hunger
I starved myself
Waiting for you to feed me
Talk to me
You can whisper
To elicit my response
Speak on my lips
So I can taste your words
Ingest it until I'm full
Are you mad?
Or is it me who has gone mad
Waiting for you to say a word
Any word.
Take without touch
Make me vibrate
From your tone
When you are done
Make me regret
Your silence
Seduce me with your words
Take me to a place, only you know how
Speak in the language of us
Let me close my eyes and feel
Every syllable
Every consonant
Every vowel
Guide me into a world that is ours
A lone
Away from prying eyes
Talk to me
Lead me to where the core of my desire is ignited
Let your words fall into a metered syncopation
In your own language
Describe the nuance of a touch
Make me crave you
Remind me of hunger
I starved myself
Waiting for you to feed me
Talk to me
You can whisper
To elicit my response
Speak on my lips
So I can taste your words
Ingest it until I'm full
Are you mad?
Or is it me who has gone mad
Waiting for you to say a word
Any word.
Take without touch
Make me vibrate
From your tone
When you are done
Make me regret
Your silence
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- Edited 18th Sep 2024 8:45am
8th Jul 2024 11:40pm
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8th Jul 2024 11:55pm
Edging... is that what this is? Lol. I was gonna work on that metered syncopation, hoping my words might dazzle you in the soft but warm moonlight. See, I'm working on it... the edging, yeah! 😉🤣 Fantastic poem, Fia. It certainly evokes a feeling.
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9th Jul 2024 00:00am
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9th Jul 2024 00:12am
Fantastic Fia. This is one powerful & seductive poem. Very real & very you. Nice work!
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9th Jul 2024 2:06am
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9th Jul 2024 6:27am
Best read slowly, I think, letting the words sink in deeply. Favourite line (for romantic eroticism):
Speak in the language of us
Speak in the language of us
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9th Jul 2024 12:34pm
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9th Jul 2024 10:50am
The wording and flow in this one is amazing.
"Take me to a place, only you know how" > yes to this.
"Take me to a place, only you know how" > yes to this.
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9th Jul 2024 8:53pm
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