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The Vow
love shown in caresses of gnarled hands
dried out from the spring of youth
skins worn like old Cashmere
that once as in love draped around
shoulders and ample bosom
hair grey highlighted with white
framed her sweet face once so pretty
love in honesty shone through his eyes
as he touched her face vowing eternal
the love of them together in a golden circle
dried out from the spring of youth
skins worn like old Cashmere
that once as in love draped around
shoulders and ample bosom
hair grey highlighted with white
framed her sweet face once so pretty
love in honesty shone through his eyes
as he touched her face vowing eternal
the love of them together in a golden circle
Published 6th Jul 2024
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Inspired by a competition
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6th Jul 2024 00:49am
You make your vows and you stay with your best friend/wife forever. Keep on writing.
6th Jul 2024 00:55am
6th Jul 2024 2:55am
6th Jul 2024 9:37am
6th Jul 2024 8:38am
Dear G,
Beautiful and enchanting that kind of love. Constant and moreover the respect and honor of a vow, which a lot of people disregard at the first sign of upset. Such a lovely write I wish you the best for this comp. H🌷
Beautiful and enchanting that kind of love. Constant and moreover the respect and honor of a vow, which a lot of people disregard at the first sign of upset. Such a lovely write I wish you the best for this comp. H🌷
6th Jul 2024 9:38am
Dear H , thank you so much for reading and commenting...I am always happy to see you. Thank you.
2nd Sep 2024 5:40pm
Promises at the beginning feel invincible knowing that they will be tested in the journey ahead.
Nice work.
Nice work.
3rd Sep 2024 11:35am
It is ..quite rare at this day and age, since there are so much more going on out there:) thank you Wally for taking time off to read this humble poem.
