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Drink
Drink
Come close and drink of me
Drink my very essence
Like a tequila or mojito shot
Take it straight back to the head
Without thought
Just a driving force of thirst
It’s presented in a tempting glass
Tinted Subtle shades of pink to corals
Rimmed with a glistening coat of sugar
Stick your tongue out and lick
Sweet, yes?
Come drink
You know you want to.
Come close and drink of me
Drink my very essence
Like a tequila or mojito shot
Take it straight back to the head
Without thought
Just a driving force of thirst
It’s presented in a tempting glass
Tinted Subtle shades of pink to corals
Rimmed with a glistening coat of sugar
Stick your tongue out and lick
Sweet, yes?
Come drink
You know you want to.
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 4th Jul 2024
| Edited 5th Jul 2024
Author's Note
Hi, I am still around. Not so vocal. Will be back full force in the fall. Fia xoxo
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4th Jul 2024 1:56pm
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4th Jul 2024 2:18pm
Stick your tongue out and lick
so fresh and tempting !!!
thanks for your surviving spirit....
so fresh and tempting !!!
thanks for your surviving spirit....
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4th Jul 2024 2:20pm
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4th Jul 2024 2:30pm
"Drink my very essence" > to me there's few things more erotic than that.
This piece has such a nice summery vibe to it, LOVE it ~ xoxo
This piece has such a nice summery vibe to it, LOVE it ~ xoxo
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4th Jul 2024 2:34pm
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4th Jul 2024 5:04pm
You've always had me hanging on your sugar-coated rim.
It's that flush after the first swallow that I love the most.
xoxo
It's that flush after the first swallow that I love the most.
xoxo
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4th Jul 2024 5:08pm
OMG.... Flushing right at this moment..... I need to.. Hydrate. Thank you Dk
and thank you for the RL
and thank you for the RL
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4th Jul 2024 6:26pm
Enjoy what sounds like a pending holiday, you may come back with fresh inspirations.
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4th Jul 2024 8:26pm
Take your own time poetess! In the meantime, I'll be here with my tongue out and thirsty
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Anonymous
5th Jul 2024 10:59am
There’s something really alluring about the phrase “a driving force of thirst” - and that’s what I picked up on most here. That whole metaphor thing you’ve got going on from drinking to lust is actually quite lovely.
I note you’ve got suttle there.. should that be subtle? Only a quick catch.
Enjoyed the layout of this one, and the thought behind it. Thank you for sharing.
-M
I note you’ve got suttle there.. should that be subtle? Only a quick catch.
Enjoyed the layout of this one, and the thought behind it. Thank you for sharing.
-M
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5th Jul 2024 3:54pm
Thak you for catching that. I kept staring at it and knew it was wrong, but my brain was not catching it. lol Appreciate that. Missy
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8th Jul 2024 9:02pm
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