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Do I GIve In

Do I give in?
To the thoughts that consume me
And threaten to ravage my mind
And leave me hopeless
And crying out for help.

Do I say no?
To the voices telling me
That I am not worth it
That I will never achieve anything
That my dreams will remain just that,
Dreams.

Do I continue to fight?
For a reality that seems elusive
For a peace that escapes me
For that one moment where it all goes away
For release.
Written by Elixir_1758 (Zephina)
Published
Author's Note
Wrote this when I was in a time of deep contemplation about my life
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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