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Invitation
Clouds of the fluffiest cotton kind hover above.
The staggering, slanted, sculpted rock's spine.
Giant weathered stones border,
the turbulent turquoise water basin.
Nature's soul rupturing invitation
To abandon agonized thoughts,
deep below the splashing and hot sun flashing.
My mind no longer fraught.
Astonishment is taught.
Let beauty invade your chasms of pain.
With peace stains.
The staggering, slanted, sculpted rock's spine.
Giant weathered stones border,
the turbulent turquoise water basin.
Nature's soul rupturing invitation
To abandon agonized thoughts,
deep below the splashing and hot sun flashing.
My mind no longer fraught.
Astonishment is taught.
Let beauty invade your chasms of pain.
With peace stains.
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Re. Invitation
3rd Jul 2024 3:08pm
Peace stains…I love that
Beautiful poem, girl. So uplifting. Thank you for this.
Beautiful poem, girl. So uplifting. Thank you for this.
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3rd Jul 2024 5:01pm
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3rd Jul 2024 3:11pm
What an inviting poem & picture. Perfect. Let's go rafting! Great write!!
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3rd Jul 2024 5:02pm
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3rd Jul 2024 5:03pm
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3rd Jul 2024 5:04pm
Peace stains… fuck, that is really genius. That bit of phrasing is just gorgeous
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3rd Jul 2024 5:42pm
Thank you! I like to imagine myself with stains of peace .
Hope it left you with one 😊
Hope it left you with one 😊
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4th Jul 2024 2:22pm
Turquoise being my favorite color this one made me smile. I have to agree with the comments above me: peace stains is simply brilliant. Great piece, dear poetess.
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4th Jul 2024 2:29pm
Thank you so very much! I loved that phrase " turbulent turquoise".
I'd like to imagine just being covered in peace stains.
I'd like to imagine just being covered in peace stains.
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5th Jul 2024 6:36am
Sounds like an atmospheric getaway. I want to dive off of a fountain to this, ha-ha. There is a certain time where words don't convey, but living in the moment does. That's kind of what I get from this. Silencing the mind with the thankfulness of life, and the surrounding beauty. Anyway, great job of writing. Take care!
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5th Jul 2024 10:35am
Hi! This is a nice surprise. Yes a lot of my themes lately are silencing the mind with beauty.
Thx for checking out
Thx for checking out
Re. Invitation
5th Jul 2024 2:19pm
''To abandon agonized thoughts''
whoever leaves Nature's charm for city's harm will surely suffer from a spiritual alienation,.
Nature is Home, source and resource, beginning and ending of all the pains,...
nice picture as a pretty background of a fine romantic, pastoral delight............
whoever leaves Nature's charm for city's harm will surely suffer from a spiritual alienation,.
Nature is Home, source and resource, beginning and ending of all the pains,...
nice picture as a pretty background of a fine romantic, pastoral delight............
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Re. Invitation
5th Jul 2024 2:29pm
Why thank you so very much for your perspective.
Nature is home.
Thx for checking out.
Nature is home.
Thx for checking out.
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5th Jul 2024 9:47pm
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