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in the bath

slowly rising, touching skin
warm bathwater drips dripping
as I 'm sliding underneath
water molecules firm belief

in the oneness all around
and everything that they surround
coalesces as they drop
into the bath which I'm on top

embraced by liquid lusciousness
and warm sensations nothing less
than transformation from before...
water's touching is much more

as I'm sliding underneath
nothing matters, not belief
not my worries or my woes
under water it all goes

drip, drip dripping, touching skin
slowly rising, slipping in
as water molecules surround
me in the bath where I'm found....
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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