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The First Day of Summer

The heat is intense
The pool water is to hot
Relief in the tub
Vision_of_insanity
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Re. The First Day of Summer
- Edited 22nd Jun 2024 12:24pm
22nd Jun 2024 2:44am
Dear V,

Never were there words so apt! Wonderful portrayal of some very sticky weather. H🌷
Honoria
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Re: Re. The First Day of Summer
22nd Jun 2024 11:08am
Thank you Honoria,
Always appreciate you reading my words.
Vision_of_insanity
Re. The First Day of Summer
22nd Jun 2024 8:34am
I'll bring the rubber ducky!
AfterSexDilemma
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22nd Jun 2024 11:09am
Cool. Just don't bring Ernie! He's a pervert!
Vision_of_insanity
Re. The First Day of Summer
Anonymous
23rd Jun 2024 11:19pm
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Anonymous
Re: Re. The First Day of Summer
24th Jun 2024 00:09am
true
Vision_of_insanity

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