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carnal ride
on the carpet of pleasure park
in the whisper of rosy marks
with the attention of fine colored stars
their smudged dreams ignites
he smells her sweet flavour
he crushes her petals with fingers
their passion turns into promises and pleasure
they paint the calm sea with their purple luster...
in the whisper of rosy marks
with the attention of fine colored stars
their smudged dreams ignites
he smells her sweet flavour
he crushes her petals with fingers
their passion turns into promises and pleasure
they paint the calm sea with their purple luster...
Published 19th Jun 2024
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"he smells her sweet flavour" I love when you put the senses in your writing Fia xoxo
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Moving to the dance of sex is one everyone wants to learn. It's a focused attention on the body of another and their needs.
To passionately kiss her, finger her, or go down on her under those stars....to give her the attention she needs....wow. :)
In my opinion, drawing in her smells, locking in with her eyes, moving with her in a way that waves move in and out on the shore of the ocean giving her an orgasm that can't be held back....that's passion and euphoria.
Your carnal poem brings these thoughts to me, Dimpy. Nice one.
To passionately kiss her, finger her, or go down on her under those stars....to give her the attention she needs....wow. :)
In my opinion, drawing in her smells, locking in with her eyes, moving with her in a way that waves move in and out on the shore of the ocean giving her an orgasm that can't be held back....that's passion and euphoria.
Your carnal poem brings these thoughts to me, Dimpy. Nice one.
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