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Together as one

My heart beats for you
I inhale as you exhale
Everlastingly
Vision_of_insanity
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Re. Together as one
17th Jun 2024 11:37pm
Nice depth of feeling in a few words. Great job!
Thor_Azine
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Re: Re. Together as one
17th Jun 2024 11:41pm
Thank you Thor.
Vision_of_insanity
Re. Together as one
(Fia Naturie)
17th Jun 2024 11:47pm
Beautiful. Fia xoxo
fianaturie8
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Re: Re. Together as one
17th Jun 2024 11:49pm
Thanks my friend.
Vision_of_insanity
Re. Together as one
18th Jun 2024 00:30am
Splendid
LilDragonFly
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Re: Re. Together as one
18th Jun 2024 00:30am
Thank you!
Vision_of_insanity
Re. Together as one
19th Jun 2024 00:34am
This is more my mood, and soft, sir.
CherryLoveNotes
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Re: Re. Together as one
19th Jun 2024 00:37am
Once and a while I write soft. Glad you enjoyed this.
Thanks!
Vision_of_insanity
Re. Together as one
19th Jun 2024 7:14am
Next time,  hold your breath! Let's see who wins! Haha
AfterSexDilemma
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Re: Re. Together as one
19th Jun 2024 11:09am
HA! We'll try it but under water!
Vision_of_insanity

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