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Passion Pond
I woke up with this feeling
A kind of instant needing
To touch it down there
Wiggling my toes
Pulling off my clothes
I felt a cool breeze down there
My hand slowly glide
Wanting to be inside
The sweet hole that’s bare, down there
Once I made it down
Guess what I found
A pond of sheer delight, down there
Like a child at play
In a watery spray
I dipped and swayed in it down there
A passion pond of treasured bliss
Fingers inserted turns and twits
It becomes a fevered dive down there
Then I stopped
My eyes did pop
He was watching me play, down there
I could not wait
To release an ache
Wanting to burst down there
I continued my assault
On a criminal at fault
Called my Pussy down there
Feeling hot
Not wanting to stop
My inner walls quivering down there
Oh so close
Just a few more pokes
And I explode down there
Satiated at last
From the initial blast
Of cum down there
I felt a dip
My body did flip
As he entered me fast down there
The idea holds true
That we feel like you do
When awaken with an urge down there
The next time you come upon
A woman playing in her pond
Give her a hand down there.
(mouths and dicks are adequate too)
A kind of instant needing
To touch it down there
Wiggling my toes
Pulling off my clothes
I felt a cool breeze down there
My hand slowly glide
Wanting to be inside
The sweet hole that’s bare, down there
Once I made it down
Guess what I found
A pond of sheer delight, down there
Like a child at play
In a watery spray
I dipped and swayed in it down there
A passion pond of treasured bliss
Fingers inserted turns and twits
It becomes a fevered dive down there
Then I stopped
My eyes did pop
He was watching me play, down there
I could not wait
To release an ache
Wanting to burst down there
I continued my assault
On a criminal at fault
Called my Pussy down there
Feeling hot
Not wanting to stop
My inner walls quivering down there
Oh so close
Just a few more pokes
And I explode down there
Satiated at last
From the initial blast
Of cum down there
I felt a dip
My body did flip
As he entered me fast down there
The idea holds true
That we feel like you do
When awaken with an urge down there
The next time you come upon
A woman playing in her pond
Give her a hand down there.
(mouths and dicks are adequate too)
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 17th Jun 2024
| Edited 19th Jun 2024
Author's Note
If I were a man, it would be called "morning wood" but I am not so I called it "Passion Pond"
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Re. Passion Pond
17th Jun 2024 00:26am
I would give you a hand, a mouth and a dick
to awaken your place down there
I loved the progression of this piece (pun intended)
to awaken your place down there
I loved the progression of this piece (pun intended)
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17th Jun 2024 00:36am
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Re. Passion Pond
17th Jun 2024 1:43am
Proof positive that for every action there is a reaction!
My favorite stanza:
"I continued my assault
On a criminal at fault
Called my Pussy down there"
My favorite stanza:
"I continued my assault
On a criminal at fault
Called my Pussy down there"
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17th Jun 2024 2:18am
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17th Jun 2024 2:19am
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17th Jun 2024 2:20am
Re. Passion Pond
Passion pond - a new word to think of, think you may have sown seeds of a poem or two from me. Love the description of the self-pleasuring inciting some intervention from him.
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17th Jun 2024 11:32am
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17th Jun 2024 6:34pm
I've just posted the first poem of mine using the two words, titled slightly differingly 'The Passion Pond'.
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17th Jun 2024 10:40am
Phenomenal write. The build up in this poem is extraordinary. Nicely done. Hope your orgasm was intense.
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17th Jun 2024 11:35am
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